Angel of Death

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! This was extremely brilliant. You know this sort of reminded me of The Princess Bride but not story-wise. You meshed comedy and fantasy into this long magnificent story perfectly. ...

10/10 Its creative and kinda funny *tries turning a lemon into a grape*

Oi Gyr is such a good critiquer!! Well anyways, as always I loved this piece. It was beautiful and your poetic lines never cease to amaze me. What caught my ...

*pokes with a stick*

I love Grey's Anatomy so this sounds interesting Name: Annalise Martin Nickname: Lise Age: 25 Position: Intern Appearance: 5'7" curvy figure, short auburn hair with blond highlights. Porcelain skinned

Wow congrats!!! I don't think I know you so *shakes hand* I'm Angel of Death but I prefer Angel. I'll be sure to drop by.

Hey Kylan, This installment was better than the first. There was more action, more emotion, and more depth. Sure a man who has a split personality or possibly suffers from ...

Hey BBB!! Awww this was a cute story. This was a good idea. Its refreshing to see another type of love because everyone is used to reading about two people ...

I love this poem. It was really simple but it carried a very powerful message. I didn't see anything wrong with this but keep writing. Sorry that I didn't have ...

Kylan you keep doing it! You have this great way of writing that makes me cry. At first you did kind of lose me but then I read it over ...

Well Jack I never knew that preyed was a word but thanks to you now I know. :D This poem has a very morbid feeling to it which is good ...

I like this but I think the eye is in the wrong place. I don't know what your story is about but I do think the eye throws off the ...

Wow congratulations on publishing a book. You really gave me hope that maybe I could publish a book one day. The cover of your book is pretty cool and its ...

I've read all three but Extras, it's not as good as the other three.

This story is getting better and better and your characters are lovely. You have me hooked and thats all there is to it. I have no complaints but I do ...